Version#2 Provocative...(Guest Entry)

He loves her

She likes him

When he is with her,

he knows that,

parting from her would be difficult,

so he avoids her....

The distances bring her close to the man

She speaks to him..

The man is dying to talk to her,

but intentionally he behaves nonchalantly...

He knows it's too early to express his love,

He knows he cannot stay away from her.

In her, he sees his reflection.

In every of her mischief,

He finds his...

When he's close to her,

He is close to his self.

And so he waits,

he waits,

till he becomes a man,

someday,

and then,

he shall, 

on his knees,

Break years of patience....

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Ankit (http://readankitagrawal.blogspot.in/) emailed me this as he wished to add something to my last post...I liked it a lot :) And yeah, you guys are free to email me your versions of it too and I'll post them here :):)

Thanks guys :)

Have a great day everyone! :)

Provocative...

He looks her way yet again,

And feels a rage so strong

He knows he needs to be calm,

Or he'll end up doing something wrong

She watches him silently as she dances,

In the arms of yet another man

She feels a satisfaction and smiles,

As she thinks about her plan

As music fills the entire room,

He orders another drink on a whim

That's what he needs right now,

To numb the burning feeling inside him

As she steps out of the circle,

Of the strangers surrounding her

She heads for his table,

As his drink, he continues to stir

His eyes hold hers,

As she walks towards him

He finds her beauty breathtaking

And around him, the lights seem to dim

Her cold lips touch his,

And douse the fire that she had lighted

She alone knows that to quench his ardor

Fire and ice had to be united 

Taking perfect provocative strides,

She moves away from him again

In search for a new toy to amuse her,

For sometime, her attention who'd gain

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Okay, so I tried something different here...I don't know if you all can visualize it, but I could see a man sitting at the bar, jealousy raging inside him as he watches the girl he loves, toy around with strangers...Well , the reason I'm giving is that she's punishing him for something, like a fight or for lack of attention, or maybe, she's just a tease :D You're welcome to add your own reasons  :)) 

I totally got inspired by a friend's recent blog post which I loved -"Fire and Ice", which you'll find at- http://www.i-me-mysolitude.blogspot.in/2012/01/fire-and-ice-55fiction-1.html, and I interpreted it in my own way...Hope she forgives me if I messed it up ;)

Anyway, hope you all liked it...and for anyone who thought there'd be a revelation of the mysterious identities of the man and the woman in the end, all I can say is -tough luck! :p

Good night guys :)